Very nice, lots of interest in the higher register
I really enjoyed this track, full of lush, catching effective musical ideas. Only problem is in their realisation: mixing etc., but really, that's what NG's about! The parts flow effortlessly, and you've clearly heard this before writing it, it has SO MUCH in terms of the composition! :)
To make this bigger, fuller, more satisfying, I think there are several techniques you should look into: transient compression on the drums, layering of parts on the drums (two sanres, two bassdrums at once etc.), maybe more reverb on the violin and some delay on some parts, it'd make the song feel like it has more space. Also maybe have a look into using other kits: I felt the snare in the half time section maybe could have been more mid heavy, and the hi hat for me wasn't quiiiiiiite bright enough. That said, I bring these up only as points for you to take on boar, or not, as routes to explore in future.
This song is thoroughly deserving of a ten.
Alex Rose,
AKA CCMIOF