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Quite like the constant moving atmosphere.

However, you've limited yourself. If you want people to be able to dance to it. You've got to keep a constant medium fast beat. Everything else is sound but you've maxed out on the Burt Bacarach factor in that respect!

Sandwhich-lord responds:

Think of it as a performance piece rather then a dance piece.

I quite like it.

But all it has is raw potential. You need to develop it. Before then, its impossible to give a useful and constructive review.

masterfil responds:

Dude its a ring tone for your fone!!!!its a finished piece!!!!i thought i would post up some ring tones for people to download and use on there fone.

have a happy MasterFil christmas :)

Haha, I like!

Its pretty nice, but definitely in need of some more stable instruments and atmospherics. Try using some basses and leads with high sustain. Right now this has a nice rhythm, and its interesting but no one can get into it, but still I have faith in you to develop this excellent W.I.P.

wilmerpwnzorz responds:

hehe, but as in my comment "song i made while bored".

but you're honest, i like that. i'm still pretty new in creating music, so i'm still developing.

i create music pretty much out of thoughts i have.
thank you :)

Loving it man!

Already downloaded and 5d, but I realised I was discourteous enough not to leave a review! I love everything that's going on, and that's A LOT by the way!

However, I have some issues with the mastering (don't take this the wrong way, the constant reworking of the drums, and the changeable melodies are all testament to this songs epicness),; namely just trun the volume down and lower the compression, maybe get a little sparser in places although just turning compression down and lowering the volume should give it the dynamic space to real develop in texture along with the instrumentation. You'll notice as a result of this that it's also of a lot better sound quality!

9 & 5
Love & peace!
AKACCMIOF

Chimy727 responds:

cool man
thanks for the review!

Get some atmospherics in ya!

Also get some better guitar and bass sounds. THOSE NEED TO BE YOUR TOP EFFING PRIORITIES!

That said, composing shows a great deal of skill, except for the samey drum part which needs less cymbal, and more hi hat work.

4&6
Love and peace.
AKACCMIOF

hooglese responds:

yea this is just my ruff draft i never do the proper4 version for newgrounds, 90%of the people just want to blam me

Nowhere near deserving it's current place.

It's way too good! It's well written, decently performed and only a little lacking in terms of instrumentation. It's also in the wrong genre. Classical rock= think Queen, maybe even AC/DC, which this isn't! I'd list it under classical ideally! And to be fair, it is neo classical!

I would only say that it needs a bit more instrumentation. Some heavier strings in places playing counter melodies where it gets samey, some atmospherics, maybe even some guitar. That said, it's a very skilled piece. I really enjoyed it.

8&5
Love & peace.
AZAKACCMIOF

foreverd1 responds:

thanks for the comment, Yea i never know what genre to put the songs in XD, moved it to general rock.

Wow man!

This is great! really great! I'm glad to say, no, I'm proud to say i've seen you get to this level! This is everything a trance tune should be, it has a vocal hook, a nice bass line, good gated synths, it develops well, well produced, really great! Maybe just add a bit of kick by turning up the main gated synth hook, but really, it's a side note.

Love and peace man.
10/10 5/5
AKACCMIOF

Aydin-Jewelz123 responds:

Many thanks dude. I will take into account your advice and see if I can make it better :)

Nice beats, nice synths.

What more can you ask for?

TimeBender responds:

it's the best song ever

This is pretty good!

Although its been badly textured (go back to the mixing board) however the drums really are superb. That said, as one NGAP user to another, people are going to judge you at least partially on the name SO BE IMAGINATIVE! That said it deserves at least an eight, plus a five seeing as itll be majorly overlooked inevitably.

BananPotais1 responds:

thanks! i know its bad mixed, made it pretty quick

Groovy!

I sympathise, and I really think that any genre couldve fitted this, from pop to funk to dnb! Top marks for originality, but maybe some glitched up vocal samples, automated filters etc., would give this the star quality most NGAP (myself included) reviewers bitch about. On a different note someone NEEDS to use this is in a flash: its so atmospheric, and would fit a decent tempo of cut scenes, and well just sounds kinda anime!

9&5
Love & peace.
AKACCMIOF

NuclearStrike responds:

Ya I'm still trying to get my name out there so people will recognize the FATMAN. It'd be cool if this got into a flash. The FATMAN can hope right....

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