This is great man!
I love what you've done with this severely ol' skool tune. However, if there is one thing that I think would make the song better, I think it's the bass, whilst it creates a strong retro feel it also makes the tune a little self conscious. Whilst everything else is superb, I might use a deeper bass with a slower attack and possibly a different rhythm with occasional variations like a fill here and there and the odd alternating octave thrown in.
All in all very nice!
9&5
Love & peace.
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